Chapter One: The trip of a lifetime

I think the first chapter is a good and short introduction.
When I read it, I knew at once very much about Alex and his life. He is an 18-year-old boy, who wants to visit his father, which he has not seen for 16 years, in Australia.
I think, that Alex is looking forward to meet his father, but at the other side he is very exited, because he doesn't know how he has to act by his father.
I think he made a good decission, becouse some children have to see both of their parents to feel themselves loved and saved. And Alex had never known his father, so it's a great expirience for him. It is also good, because he is goining to fly to Australia, a very nice continent.
I'm strechtched how the story will go on.